Pen & Ink Writer's Group of Norridge

Poetic Integrity

David Rumer

A significant difference between traditional metered rhyme and what is offered today as poetry, (Prosetry) is integrity. In metered rhyme the theme and rhyme scheme of the poem are usually established in the first stanza. Succeeding stanzas expand the theme while conforming to the meter and rhyme scheme of the first.

When an idea for a poem occurs to the poet, it will often find expression in a first stanza format. The theme can then be expanded in additional stanzas, but, must agree with the rhyme scheme set forth in the first, to maintain integrity.

The following stanzas demonstrate expressing the idea of a prospective new poem and establishing the meter and rhyme scheme for additional stanzas.

           Black Cat (Tj)
The snow was coming down in fits and starts.
Warily, I stepped on the snowy porch.
And there the little black kitten waited,
To captivate our unsuspecting hearts

           By The Book
Books stand lonely on the shelf
Among many of their kind,
Ready to silently speak
To any inquiring mind.

Note the stanzas have different rhyme schemes and different meter. The first stanzas are not written in stone and may be changed considerably in the course of completing the poem. The first stanza written will, nevertheless, usually establish the format of the final poem.



Summer School Epiphany:
Johnny Got His Gun

Michael Pruchnicki

Windows cracked open --
the sharp crack of bat on ball
on the diamond outside!
Shouts as hitters
rounded bases
and fielders caught pop flies!
We sat sweltering in the muggy room.

Perhaps it was the teachers voice
that lured us at first
and teased us out of our discomfort;
Gradually, bit by bit,
shouts faded to murmurs.

We listened intently.

"I can't hear! My arms!
What have they done with them!
No legs! Blind! A dream?
No more walking! No running!
Jesus, there must be some way!"

All the time the teacher read,
muffled and subdued sounds
filtered in from outside
as though we were far away
deep in some dark dream!
Dust motes swirled and glittered,
dancing in sunbeams.

The bell ending the last day rang.
We sat silently.
Footsteps hurried by in the hallway.



A Feast of Ravens

Michael Pruchnicki

Two ravens looking down on the battlefield --
"Shall we pluck that lad's eyes? Bit of tripe, too?"
"Why not? Lad won't miss 'em, eh?"

Eyelids peeled and orbs swallowed in a trice!
Lad lying, limbs askew, prompt the pair
To nudge aside the shield and go for heart
And lights, tearing through tissue, bone and gristle
To the brave lad's very core!

Bloody bills hack away at chunks of gory meat,
Until satiated, bellies full, they rise.

"No more!"

The ravens ascend with slow heavy wing-beat
Toward the eastern horizon.



Lonesome Road

David Rumer

If I am left behind, to travel on alone,
    You'll be forever in my sight;
  In every flower that blooms by day,
   Or, in the stillness of the night.
    The happiness of our past life,
     In vivid mem'ry will remain;
   The wispy ghosts of days gone by,
Like haunting notes of love's refrain.

   Our yesterdays will not be gone.
 Those pleasures, I'll cherish ever.
Since you were only meant for me,
   Now, our parting can be never.
 Why did we make our way as one?
And, what gave us this need to care?
      To the mystery of our love
I'm sure there's nothing can compare.

   If I'm the one who's staying on,
    To dwell upon our happiness,
You will remain here on my mind,
And I will love you more, not less.
If you'll just saunter on your way,
Until the day fate makes its claim,
And, down that path, I follow you.
   Hear, as I softly call your name.



Love and the Five Senses

Samuel DiMatteo

Beloved, I look in your eyes, down to the essence of your very soul.
I see love.
From your lips I hear words of passion in the sound of those words.
I hear love.
While holding your hand, my heart beats faster.
I feel love.
In the warmth and passion of your soft lips, kissing mine,
I taste love.
Your glowing love aura gives off a fragrant aroma.
I smell love.
You make me see, hear, feel, taste, and smell love.
That is why,
I love you, Darling.



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